It is a good structured piece of work although they are a few mistakes for example in the first paragraph some bits do not make sense so i think that could be amended also you could add some numbers for step-by-step instructions so there is no confusion with the pictures and the paragraphs linked up to it.
It is a good structured piece of work although they are a few mistakes for example in the first paragraph some bits do not make sense so i think that could be amended also you could add some numbers for step-by-step instructions so there is no confusion with the pictures and the paragraphs linked up to it.
ReplyDeletewww: just noticed that this is your P6 and the later post is M2.
ReplyDeleteTherefore you have reached the criteria for both.